Let Me… Comments

very well written poem. i like the way you compared words with nature. very good jib.

Konstantin, Very beautifully, gently and romantically... I hope such self-sacrifice-will not pass in vain.... 10x10.. B.W. Tsira

Let me be you guiding star in the sky The bright sun that will give you life The missing piece that will fill your heart Just let me be Let me be --------- Sorry i added a little in your cute and lovely composition...10+++