Friday, July 17, 2009

Let Me Comments

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Let me hold you
let me feel the warmth of your heart
Let me hold you
Let me be the one you count on him
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mohammad sadik
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warm feelings and hopes

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~ Jon London ~ 18 July 2009

Nice poem but I feel the *let me*....is a bit too much....but the emotion is lovely.....keep expressing

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