Friday, April 6, 2007

Let Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me stay a little while
Or until the morning dawn
And all the shadows are gone
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David Harris
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Melvina Germain 07 April 2007

Ahh David, you are so sweet, I know that beautiful wife of yours is smiling and loving every word. Beautiful poem David, love it. a big (10) from me.--Melvina--

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Marci Made 06 April 2007

I for one hope that she let you stay......with so much emotion for her in you.......this is a delight of a poem...............marci.m.(~_~)

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JoAnn McGrath 06 April 2007

Ahhhhhhhhh there is a different side to David.......nice one : O)

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Theodora Onken 06 April 2007

Ah so very romantic. a sheer delight to read! Regards, Theo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 06 April 2007

Let me love you... I think i am having a bad influence on you my friend, the romantic is starting to come out... David 10

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A man who knows that 'mere' presence itself is an expression of love... so many don't. A fine piece D. t x

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Lisa Wilkinson 06 April 2007

I hope whoever she is David she gets to see this, a warm expressive poem with such simplicity. Well done, best wishes.Lisa

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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