Thursday, September 28, 2017

Let It Pass Comments

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Departure Haunts
sad piercing
but beautiful
you give life to a memory
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me poet yeps poet
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Dev Anand 06 October 2017

So move on to another path forget pain and wrath.. this message at the final stanza is really fine. thank you dear poet........ dev

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 October 2017

THANX DEVS

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Mj Lemon 03 October 2017

This is going on favourites list. There comes a time for everyone when they realize or learn that second chances and other opportunities....no longer exist. Much truth in your words. Phenomenal poem, Poet.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2017

thanx LEMONS muchlee

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Rajnish Manga 02 October 2017

'forget pain and wrath' it is easier said than suffer. You cannot let go of a lovely relationship and forget about it in a jiffy. Thanks. live on a new life at last for you shall never again from here pass

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2017

great of you RM

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Jeanette Telusma 30 September 2017

- - -Now let go the past live on a new life at last for you shall never again from here pass keep the past as a flavour that was not cast- - - An eloquently written poem advising the reader to let go, and move on. Thanks for sharing a much needed word at such a time as this that we're living in. Blessings to you always, dear poet.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2017

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGrateful Telusma

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2017

so Grateful JT

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