Saturday, June 9, 2012

Let It Out Comments

Rating: 4.4

From the moment I saw you,
I knew that something was wrong.
What makes you laugh makes others cry,
but I don't want to see you die.
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The Queen's Dagger
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Adriana Avila 12 June 2013

There is love, and empathy in this write. Good job. Blessings, AA

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Captain Cur 13 June 2012

There is a lot of pain in this poem/song but healing and hope through out. Very good message in a memorable format. Thanks for sharing.

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Deci Hernandez 12 June 2012

if i ever become an english teacher i would share to the class do not go lonely into that good night and possibly this poem. it very sad how our brothers and sisters reach this moment.

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Darkangel Flyfree 12 June 2012

A great poem, I loved it and it does sound like a song, but a very good one.

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