Monday, September 7, 2009

Let It Go On Comments

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Let the pain,
go on,
eyes are sore and wet,
let this rain pour on,
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq 30 September 2009

No one offers space in the crowd, If you can stand, after pushing me down, Then let you go on. and go on. again the courage is found here and this is what making you the poet of courageous feelings and thoughts are relatively well designed and construction of the body of poem is best.. meaningful and heartfelt way of writing..well done..loved it..10/10

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Indira Renganathan 07 September 2009

Voice of a kind heart or incapable heart...? interesting

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