Now, I feel low
Among all those who can do more.
I still tried but couldn't beat them all.
I cried, cried till I saw the rising dawn
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Vaibhav.
Let it flow Let it flow Let your skills not to go waste anymore. I know, My enemies can do much more But my dawn, it cannot be stopped from rising anymore. very fine expressions which are very very positive.. the reader is affected by your words. tony
This is indeed a wonderful poem devoted to success in life through efforts backed by self confidence. I know.... My enemies can do much more But my dawn, it cannot be stopped from rising anymore.
Such a beautiful and inspiring song, Vaibhav...10++++
" Let your skills not to go waste anymore." " ...go to waste...." Not bad. 'Tis good to have confidence in oneself, but i would not emphasize 'beating' aka 'winning against' others, or being 'the victor.' Do as best as you can for yourself & others in life, and try to be satisfied. I'll copy & paste poem to you as a message, with additional comments. bri :)