Monday, October 5, 2015

Let It Flow Comments

Rating: 5.0

All of my yearnings are flowing swiftly
To be captivated
In the valley of endless embrace,
Where you are lying still
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Sanjukta Nag
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

In the valley of endless embrace mind is winging still through swinging of earrings. Taking existence in nice mood is wise ever. Love matters a lot. This poem is nicely presented. Revisiting this poem values of course...10

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Liza Sudina 05 October 2015

You know, there is no time in real reality! somehow in God's vision all is at the same time! don't know how -but saint people prove it! Lovely poem!

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Rajnish Manga 05 October 2015

The narrative flows like a beautiful cascade of imagination drenched in the spirit of eternal love 'To be captivated In the valley of endless embrace'. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

Time after time......Left me speechlesssssssssssss Divine writing, loved it n loved it..... To quote my fav lines..Ah breathtaking. Life is breathing hard As passion overflows from your heaving chest, Like reminiscence streams down From an ecstatic heart, Only for taking in my existence

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

In a captivated mind realizing the feelings of swiftly flowing ear rings are definitely interesting and amazing...10

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