Saturday, August 8, 2009

Let It Be Your Will To Do Good Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s hard to do a thing against your will.
There’s a command and you want to conceal.
There is this heavy sorrow in your heart.
You decide, this work, you will not start.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Sulochna Pandit 10 August 2009

Believe me, it will be much more better, If to this world you’ll not be bitter. Let it be your will to do good daily. Remind yourself to be humble though you’re shiny! ...u will l hve to perform good else it will bite u for ever....10

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Lycko Chizo 08 August 2009

I admire your persuasive writting which is depicted in this well penned poem of yours. Yeah your right let it be our will to do good. But this is just what i notice. Our hands lies a marvelous power of doing good and evil. The decision is in us. Yes we must let the good prevail against evil. But there are times that evil reign on us. We commit sins. Thanks by d way 4 sharing this. Keep writting your incredible poems. And inspire your readers. Rate: 10/10

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Isaac Maliya 08 August 2009

Doing good should always be our goal as human beings!

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