Friday, January 12, 2007

Let It Be Said Comments

Rating: 3.5

Lessons have come too fast and immoral
Tis another day they would like to borrow
The ideas of man
Has distracted and distrubed our existence
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Jon Ojala 17 January 2008

Suzan, Powerful images, powerful words. We can't escape our own collective actions, nor deny what we have built. We can only work towards righteousness and hope that it is enough to combat those who work towards our downfall. Thanks for the warning! Best regards, Jon

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Nathan Strange 13 January 2007

A prophetical read, futile and frustrating yet depressing and insightful at the same time! I like it.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 January 2007

Powerful expression and delivery...Well crafted structure...Epistlesque feel works well, with your choice of verbage...Solid Work, Suzan... ~ F. j. R. ~

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