Lessons have come too fast and immoral
Tis another day they would like to borrow
The ideas of man
Has distracted and distrubed our existence
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A prophetical read, futile and frustrating yet depressing and insightful at the same time! I like it.
Powerful expression and delivery...Well crafted structure...Epistlesque feel works well, with your choice of verbage...Solid Work, Suzan... ~ F. j. R. ~
Suzan, Powerful images, powerful words. We can't escape our own collective actions, nor deny what we have built. We can only work towards righteousness and hope that it is enough to combat those who work towards our downfall. Thanks for the warning! Best regards, Jon