Sunday, January 5, 2014

Let It Be Calm Comments

Rating: 4.5

Play a song for me
so I can enjoy dancing free.
Open the door so I can breathe
and make the bread to eat.
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maria goodison
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V P Mahur 24 March 2014

Dear Maria, 'I think today should just be ours' beautiful expression. Loved it. Thanks! ........................... 'Worship Of Love' ..................................

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Khairul Ahsan 22 January 2014

'Tell the mother-in-law not to come round that we do not need her today for my love, I think today should just be ours.' - Liked it.

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Dave Walker 17 January 2014

A great poem with a wonderful flow.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 January 2014

Lovely piece.

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