Let Him Sleep Comments

not all men face such problem, there are some men who are really gifted with bountiful love of their parents, wife and kids, for those who are yet to get, only god can answer their prayers by gifting them with better love life.. just can't blame poverty, we need to work towards it to eradicate it.. nice poem with direct words touching the concept...

strength to create a new world..... very nice and catchy and it summerizes your whole composition. i really liked this poem thanks for sharing.

A parallel poem to “Let her sleep” he or she both if taken birth cannot escape from these adversities and this is life…sensitive poem with engraved sense….

A very beautiful write with a lovely flow and a meaningful content. It was a pleasure to read it. Love Ernestine XXX