Ship sails in her eyes
But there tsunami arise
The tides turned into waves
And waves turned into raves...
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Thank you for pointing out this lovely poem, upon reading it I was surprised by its similarities and intrigued by the mind that wrote it. :)
Impressive. A very strong writer you are. A strong woman. Thank you, you certainly will always rise... Of course well worthy of a 10, as 11 is not an option.
Her dreams are broken into fragments Miles apart her desires have went... let her ship meet the harbor and the mighty heavens. a very nice poem, very clear message. thank u. tony
The reading of this poem gave me a good, good feeling. I love the rhymes and the structure and also its wonderful meaning.
you manage to instill fearlessness in all women I help them so that must all now know they are second to none don't let men cow anyone down women are and have been goddesses JHANSI KI RANI -JOAN OF ARC- MARGARET THATCHER- INDIRA GANDHI- ALL women no!
YES RATED 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
The poem tells us not to be bogged down by adversities. Don't lose hope. Be positive and be firm to realise your dreams in life. Thanks, Naila Rais. The tides turned into waves And waves turned into raves... Tears.... shine like pearl on her face Let her rise..... and grow.... Let her dreams touch the sky
A really wonderful poem, a woman’s empowerment is her grace, charm and steadfastness in purpose...great write
A flawless poem Naila. Perfect!