Saturday, November 10, 2018

Let Her Share Her Wishes.....! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ship sails in her eyes
But there tsunami arise
The tides turned into waves
And waves turned into raves...
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Naila Rais
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Kostas Lagos 28 November 2018

A flawless poem Naila. Perfect!

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Thomas Kane 27 November 2018

Thank you for pointing out this lovely poem, upon reading it I was surprised by its similarities and intrigued by the mind that wrote it. :)

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Donnie Wolff 16 November 2018

Impressive. A very strong writer you are. A strong woman. Thank you, you certainly will always rise... Of course well worthy of a 10, as 11 is not an option.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 November 2018

Her dreams are broken into fragments Miles apart her desires have went... let her ship meet the harbor and the mighty heavens. a very nice poem, very clear message. thank u. tony

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Hans Vr 11 November 2018

The reading of this poem gave me a good, good feeling. I love the rhymes and the structure and also its wonderful meaning.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 November 2018

you manage to instill fearlessness in all women I help them so that must all now know they are second to none don't let men cow anyone down women are and have been goddesses JHANSI KI RANI -JOAN OF ARC- MARGARET THATCHER- INDIRA GANDHI- ALL women no!

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Naila Rais 11 November 2018

Yah true...... Hope u rate it.... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 November 2018

YES RATED 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Dave Walker 10 November 2018

A wonderful poem, women are the empowerment of this world.

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Naila Rais 11 November 2018

Thanks sir for ur kind visit......

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Rajnish Manga 10 November 2018

The poem tells us not to be bogged down by adversities. Don't lose hope. Be positive and be firm to realise your dreams in life. Thanks, Naila Rais. The tides turned into waves And waves turned into raves... Tears.... shine like pearl on her face Let her rise..... and grow.... Let her dreams touch the sky

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Naila Rais 11 November 2018

Thanks so much for ur encouraging words.... ...... Naila

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Bill Cantrell 10 November 2018

A really wonderful poem, a woman’s empowerment is her grace, charm and steadfastness in purpose...great write

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Naila Rais 11 November 2018

Thank u... Soon will be reading urs..... Naila

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Shakil Ahmed 10 November 2018

Add a comment.Simply wonderful

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