Branches reaching out for us
Extended arms in embrace
Birds nesting everywhere
She stands tall with grace
She is the tree with deep roots
Feeding us all with her fruits
Forgetting herself in the bargain
Her pleasures forfeited for pain within
She is a woman, she is life
Her blossoms, create seed
Life, in orchard and its creed
Let her leaves shine, let her branches soar
Let her not sacrifice anymore …
i smiled when i read this.. grreat poem.. you can teell what u stand and belive for! !
A great tribute to women. If only the realization turns into implementation! ! Vanita
this is a tribute to all women and also the best poem i have read so far simple but meaning...in every alphabets..brilliant.. keep writing
Let her not sacrifice anymore …...very touching and preaching line....I think, second time I comment....doesn't matter....excellent poem once again...that last line bears a very good metaphor....congrats
what a tribute to womanhood in all its glory....hats off to you Nikunj... the ending 'let her not sacrifice anymore' stands out.
Nikunj, this is soooo beautiful and vivid in its capturing the mood of feminity in its wholesome splendour... You have very soft thoughts for the female community and may you be blessed - arya
Nikunji, I must admit you made me wish all men could read this and start valuing us. You really do value a woman, which is quite attractive.
I can relate to this poem. Your message is lovely and our higher power knew we had the strength to handle it all that's why He/She put us in that position. Liked the smoothness of your poem, just like the softness of a woman, nice form.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
woman...... she is supreme sacrifice...........