# # Let Her Not Sacrifice Anymore..... Poem by Nikunj Sharma

# # Let Her Not Sacrifice Anymore.....

Rating: 4.5


Branches reaching out for us
Extended arms in embrace
Birds nesting everywhere
She stands tall with grace
She is the tree with deep roots
Feeding us all with her fruits
Forgetting herself in the bargain
Her pleasures forfeited for pain within
She is a woman, she is life
Her blossoms, create seed
Life, in orchard and its creed
Let her leaves shine, let her branches soar
Let her not sacrifice anymore …

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 04 September 2009

woman...... she is supreme sacrifice...........

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Renee Zehnder 03 September 2009

i smiled when i read this.. grreat poem.. you can teell what u stand and belive for! !

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 02 September 2009

I like the metaphor! Very well written....10

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Vanita Thakkar 01 September 2009

A great tribute to women. If only the realization turns into implementation! ! Vanita

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Shelly Shelly 01 September 2009

this is a tribute to all women and also the best poem i have read so far simple but meaning...in every alphabets..brilliant.. keep writing

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Indira Renganathan 06 March 2010

Let her not sacrifice anymore …...very touching and preaching line....I think, second time I comment....doesn't matter....excellent poem once again...that last line bears a very good metaphor....congrats

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Pradyumna Jyotir 28 January 2010

what a tribute to womanhood in all its glory....hats off to you Nikunj... the ending 'let her not sacrifice anymore' stands out.

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, aryaindia 29 December 2009

Nikunj, this is soooo beautiful and vivid in its capturing the mood of feminity in its wholesome splendour... You have very soft thoughts for the female community and may you be blessed - arya

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Tshepiso Prayer 13 October 2009

Nikunji, I must admit you made me wish all men could read this and start valuing us. You really do value a woman, which is quite attractive.

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Christine Schmidt 02 October 2009

I can relate to this poem. Your message is lovely and our higher power knew we had the strength to handle it all that's why He/She put us in that position. Liked the smoothness of your poem, just like the softness of a woman, nice form.

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