Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Let Her Go Comments

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I wake up in the morning feeling your touch on my skin I look into your eyes your beautiful your to good for me but I had to let you go I love your hair your lips when they touch mine I love that I can hold you tight and never let go your heart is mine I let it go I wipe away the tears when you cry but that's what lovers do you let go and never get it back I brought you daffodil's and brought you breakfast in bed that's how much I loved you now its dead I loved you but I had to let you go
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lauren hutchinson
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Oscar Robles 19 June 2013

Very nice. Constructive criticism here, put it to a little more structure, but overall good. Thank you.

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