Friday, August 8, 2014

Let Go Of The Fear Comments

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Let go of the fear,
Of a startled young deer,
Listening for the sound of padded paws,
In case they come with sharp claws.
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Stephen Katona
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Chinedu Dike 08 May 2015

Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance - it's usually a magnified reflection of something small. That's why on standing up to fear, we usually find it inconsequential. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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* Sunprincess * 29 August 2014

..........very nice....fear is one of those emotions which can help us, as much as hurt us....

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 August 2014

escape from one lend you to the other......great write, thanks a lot

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Valsa George 11 August 2014

When our heart is in the grip of fear, we cannot enjoy life or make use of our innate faculties! If we patiently sit and analyse, we come to realize that most of our fears are illusory. A mind which is held captive of Fear can neither see the beauty nor the charm of life.....! So it is very crucial that we learn to conquer our irrational fears! Let go of the fear. And your soul may start to clear. Don't let the pain in your head, Fill your heart with dread. Enjoyed this sweetly rhyming poem with a powerful message!

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