Rising rage overwhelms me
As I think about what they did
I try to keep away from them
I keep my feelings hid
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i think your poem should be taken around the world for teachind brethrens! ! ! IT IS SO INSPIRATIONAL AND TRUE! ! !
luv this poem.somehow, it describes exactly how i feel.....the note of forgiveness is inspiring.
wow... this is so amazing.. love rules in the end... i love this poem.. you are a gifted writer.. can i share this poem of yours to my friends and love ones? ... please...: D thank you so much...
I've read this fab poem again. TryAnger when you have spare minute. Regards Sally.
I've been there' I am there, I do swear, I liked it, I felt it, I am it. Tgc
Dear madam, it was really great! ! ! ! ! ! reflects the psychological self crossings, self introspection, and down to earth verses won the heart.... true words from heart.....hope you continue to achieve marvels....
A remarkable write, Vanessa. Until one can truly forgive those who have done them wrong, the wrongdoers retain some control over ones emotions. When forgiveness occurs, they lose all that control and one's spirit is again free. Forgiveness = Victory, but it's never an easy thing to do...A 10 indeed. Richard
Ah, Vanessa: When one realizes that you can forgive and not forget, that is when one learns from those tears that must be shed on our journey to maturity. Glad you liked my poem -Brush Strokes. Try -Lies- and see if you don't get a chuckle because that was my intention. Adeline
I've been through the same as you.It comes back to me at times and Ican't forgive.
A very well penned and poignant write that shows the heart and talent you got! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...
Great sentiments. I liked the way you described your feelings. Great vivid imagery and a perfect style. A very well-balanced write indeed. Excellent Thanks for sharing... If you have time, please read my new poems.
it is good that you have written th poem out. That's one of the best ways to let go. And now you can 'Re-Birth' your flow of creative instinct and write only of beautiful things... Be well, Poetess... Ron S King.
I understandyour piece very well... but I find I can't shut that door.