Sunday, April 10, 2011

Let Go And Forgive. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rising rage overwhelms me
As I think about what they did
I try to keep away from them
I keep my feelings hid
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Vanessa Hughes
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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 June 2014

I understandyour piece very well... but I find I can't shut that door.

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Lyn Paul 27 October 2012

What an inspiring poem. Thank You

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Deodatus Agricola 14 August 2012

i think your poem should be taken around the world for teachind brethrens! ! ! IT IS SO INSPIRATIONAL AND TRUE! ! !

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Atseinuo Sekhose 29 April 2012

luv this poem.somehow, it describes exactly how i feel.....the note of forgiveness is inspiring.

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wow... this is so amazing.. love rules in the end... i love this poem.. you are a gifted writer.. can i share this poem of yours to my friends and love ones? ... please...: D thank you so much...

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 April 2012

I've read this fab poem again. TryAnger when you have spare minute. Regards Sally.

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jas Cagz 03 April 2012

I've been there' I am there, I do swear, I liked it, I felt it, I am it. Tgc

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 01 April 2012

Dear madam, it was really great! ! ! ! ! ! reflects the psychological self crossings, self introspection, and down to earth verses won the heart.... true words from heart.....hope you continue to achieve marvels....

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C.R. Clark 25 July 2011

A remarkable write, Vanessa. Until one can truly forgive those who have done them wrong, the wrongdoers retain some control over ones emotions. When forgiveness occurs, they lose all that control and one's spirit is again free. Forgiveness = Victory, but it's never an easy thing to do...A 10 indeed. Richard

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Adeline Foster 21 June 2011

Ah, Vanessa: When one realizes that you can forgive and not forget, that is when one learns from those tears that must be shed on our journey to maturity. Glad you liked my poem -Brush Strokes. Try -Lies- and see if you don't get a chuckle because that was my intention. Adeline

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 April 2011

I've been through the same as you.It comes back to me at times and Ican't forgive.

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Romeo Della Valle 17 April 2011

A very well penned and poignant write that shows the heart and talent you got! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 April 2011

Great sentiments. I liked the way you described your feelings. Great vivid imagery and a perfect style. A very well-balanced write indeed. Excellent Thanks for sharing... If you have time, please read my new poems.

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Ron S King 10 April 2011

it is good that you have written th poem out. That's one of the best ways to let go. And now you can 'Re-Birth' your flow of creative instinct and write only of beautiful things... Be well, Poetess... Ron S King.

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Vanessa Hughes

Vanessa Hughes

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