'Let Go' Comments

Eyes that seemed to say, “Let go” What a lovely expression!

And then... I read on- to the next, and I'm overwhelmed by your words...Speeechless, I should say. Outstanding Write! ; -) Kelly.

I very much like the contrast between the first and last lines. This empowers the story, granting the message emphasis, And by extension, greater meaning. The repetition at the end reinforces that. A well constructed piece. Kudos.

fabulous poem.i like it especially the ending~nb

I like your poem. I tried to rate it (10) but couldn't, I don't know what I'm doing wrong, but it seems my vote isn't being counted.

Beautiful, emotional and a wonderful ending. So well written, congrats on your poem and thank you for sharing it with us.

Deep and inspiring. keep on writing. and please comment on my poems