Friday, April 11, 2008

Let Get Laughter Way Out Of Yourself Comments

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Let get laughter way out of yourself
Make the happy sound awake
Laughter magic and enchanting
Don't sustain it in your soul
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Tzivia Druin 20 May 2013

very good poem! but you might want to separate it into different stanza, it makes it easier to read and it flows better! ! but congrats its a very good poem: i wrote a poem, I Should have, Would have, Could have, But didnt! ! you should go and check it out and vote

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 April 2008

lovely poem, beautiful..........

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