Saturday, January 17, 2009

Let Everyday Be Monday Comments

Rating: 3.9

Care
Desire
Flare
Fire
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C Richard Miles 22 January 2009

Very clever rhyming, telling the story one word at a time. Well thought out!

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Nithya Raghavan 22 January 2009

that was a great poem! a true masterpiece....if you have time, have a look at my poem 'when pyramids crumble'

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Jose Murguia 18 January 2009

pretty good job a1o! ...

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beautiful floor. you have skillz.. check out my piece called essence

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Catrina Heart 17 January 2009

The ires and ions of life...ended in silence, a destruction or a virtuous action...Pretty nice poem...10

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