Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, September 9, 2012

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It shakes my confidence
When I look at hungry eyes at once
They stare at me as if I am the only one
Woman on earth and found by no one
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

ood Gajanan Mishra6 hours ago nice Comment 0 well don

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

Nieek Joseph6 hours ago needs more pain if u see what i mean Comment 0 Yikes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

Amber Reedus6 hours ago I see whut you are trying to do here. But honestly, I can't see it all the way through. I have an issue when people use the same word to rhyme. And even more so, when they have intentions of rhyming words....That don't even rhyme. Needs work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

It shakes my confidence When I look at hungry eyes at once

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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