Tuesday, June 21, 2016

Lest They Forget Comments

Rating: 4.9

L'st they forget,
When your road becomes rough
Like the shadows in darkness
That bring dispair 'n' gloom.
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Jenny Nadine
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As we travel life's journey we encounter the good and the bad..but we never travel alone..good poem congratulations on being selected for poet of the day..

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Christina Simmons 24 March 2017

Such a wonderful well written poem. I found it a joy to read; effortlessly! ! ! Congratulation! ! !

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Daniel Jones 24 March 2017

Wonderful lines, congratulations, well deserved Poet of the day! looking forward to reading more!

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 March 2017

Beautiful poem with positive message. When roads become tough they bring despair and gloom but they fade as fast as morning dews. Everyone have to cross through this path. Congrats on member poem of the day. Concluded with beautiful lines..

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Seema Chowdhury 24 March 2017

Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day. Continue writing and sharing your words. take care and have a blessed weekend.

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Bill Cantrell 24 March 2017

The cobblestones have become broken shards of disappointments, assurance is confirmed as the dew softens our steps as the shadows watch and wait......this is a wonderful poem youbhave written and well deserves poem of the day! ! ! Congratulations my friend 10++++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 March 2017

Life is full of ups and downs. True friends never leave you when you are going through a rough patch. One has to move on despite being lagged behind as wheel of fortune never ceases to roll and may place you ahead of all. Very nice poem with a message. Congratulation.

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Tom Allport 24 March 2017

a rocky road poem of the many ups and downs that we all encounter during our lifetime? ... we written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 March 2017

Morning dew..... congrats on being selected...

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Kayode Are 24 March 2017

Vivid reminder of how close the paths of life are. Enjoyable.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2017

Seeing shadows in darkness sometimes we get confusion and fear. But the morning dew transfers joy from nature to us and we get light of morning. Wondering and creeping in new path we start searching reality of happiness. Removing fear we shall travel in eternal path to God. Very interesting poem is shared. Congratulations! We are happy seeing your poem as the poem of the day....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2017

Shadows in darkness! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Paul Warren 24 March 2017

A great poem full of emotion and congratulations on poem of the day!

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Ernest Makuakua 22 June 2016

Lest they forget, When their road becomes rough. There will be no fear Since once again, It is your path thanks for sharing

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Jenny Taylor 22 June 2016

Thank you, Ernest, for all the positive feedback on all my poems today! You are greatly appreciated! . I can't wait to read your work and return the same. Will do so, real soon! Blessings, Jen; -)

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