Lessons Of Lies Comments

Hopefully years after years will soon be a thing of the past and a caterpillar will turn into a beautiful butterfly as you are. Yes grief can build up to heights unknown but they also can be happy days again. A very inspiring write coming from a youthful person as yourself.

A deep, well written piece, which I hope isn't based on too much personal experience. The repetitious line 'years upon years' drives home the point well.

a very nice and different poem i liked the repetitive rhetorical usage of time instrument to add dimension nice liked