Friday, February 14, 2014

Lessons In Love – A Valentine’s Tale Comments

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I wonder what happened to R…?
He soon quit me when I wouldn’t go as far -
or as fast - as he wanted.
Leaving teenage me crushed and daunted
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Susy Evelyne
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Stephen Katona 05 August 2015

Susy, I love this wise tale. To find true love it is so important to recognise when love is not true and not be swayed by things that are shallow.

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Elena Plotkin 17 March 2015

Great write and great message! My favorite stanza is But looking back – oh relief! He was a charmer, a fickle thief of hearts. It was in his plan that we would part. Our Valentine's embrace on an escalator would mean nothing to him two days later. And all the sweet words he wrote and said were romantic clichés he’d just read.

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John Brown 16 February 2014

A cad and a bounder, who caused you to flounder! Great poem Susy - I love it.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 February 2014

lessons in love, good writing, I like it.

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Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

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