Lessons From A Tortoise Comments
When trouble attacks, I make no noise
Simply take on the foe with poise.
Curling into a ball
I retreat into my shell
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You are The Mistress of this sort of piece. Again a well-crafted extended analogy - with a lesson. Well done.
Praise for your rich imagination and wisdom beyond your years. Warm regards, Sandra
FEEL BAD FOR THE NEXT HARE THAT MAKES ITS DARE TO SIT & STARE AT MON FRERE, PREETI! I LOVE THIS, QUITE A LOT...THE THEME SMACKS OF VIVACIOUS IMMAGINATION...RHYTHM & RHYME IN GOOD SYNC...A TRULY FUN READ &WELL CRAFTED WORK....PREETS IS BACK IN POETIC HAVEN! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
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7/27/2025 10:34:49 AM # 1.0.0
preets my teacher...i always told you i have a lot to learn from you...this is true...backstep to recoup...the best strategy...great poem...you have changed a lot in you style, preets...great going dear...a straight 10...love...nalini