Hanging out with the girls next door,
Oh, what troubles we found galore. When
Warnings were ignored.And as we got bored,
drinking was explored. Listening to wrong,
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and Dr. Pintu Mahakul, then still Pintu Mahakul, since I knew him too well from PoetFreak.Com
2018 gave me light on my path to repond on poems of PH friends. I learned a very lot by the guidance of Mrs. Rose Marie Juan Austin
BUT I did not know HOW to continue my path here to read poems of my PH friends, conclusion: I could not give comments all those years, from 2002 till 2018.
The year of 2017? I submitted poems, BUT did not know yet HOW to respond on all the poems submitted here on PH. So terrible, I knew how to submit my own poems (in 2017)
Rebecca---you give hope to others feeling the weight of their sins and wanting to be free==God bless you
This wonderful poem presents vivid account of lesson learnt in life. You justified the title of the poem with last three lines...brilliantly expressed!
A moving story imbued with a great lesson in life. A meaningful and uplifting write.
This is very familiar, experiences of youth...been there, Im glad you shared yours...its good you came out of this alive, very truthful poem!
I guess you survived is why you wrote this lovely poem. Been there done that a few scars from bars to show.
A thought-provoking poem about youth and friendship.Very attentively worded.5 Stars Full! A true fsacinating poem, Becca!
Well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Rebecca.
The rest of my life, I've implored.To our Lord, my sins to remove, From the core.....earnest prayer! An adorable piece of poetry......10
Thank you! .. Dr. Dillip, For your very kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry is filled with such inspirational beauty, that's ever so powerful, and moving! .. Thank you! .. And I look forward to reading more! ..God bless! ..
Thank You! ! ! Howard, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Beautiful, Deep And Strong! ! ! ! ! Flows Ever So Beautifully Like A Song! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
Rich in a realism that is both robust and redemptive!
A poem of substance: scintillating expression with little touch of horror................And as we got bored, drinking was explored....! Excellent ending...Liked the rhythm and rhyme..Extremely well penned....! Happy New Year 2018
A lovely and intentional poem...... entitled Lessons, with a meaningful reason. Thanks for sharing and I do believe as one reads this poem it could serve as a wonderful prevention of certain life style in ones life.10++++++
A reality that human has to bear, , , , in the end God is the only hope!
Thank You! ! ! Marvin, For Such A Beautiful Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Visiting Your Poetry Page! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
It seems Poetry did God's work And now, you're worth so much more, Your poetry, opened new doors, And brought you to good, open shores, Admirable what you have done, Your poetry shines bright as sun. Congratulations, poet for more than one day.
Thank You! ! ! Sandra, My Goodness, For Such A Beautiful Response! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Ever, So Beautifully! ! ! ! ! Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !
My dearest Becca, thank you that I may share my thoughts about the years I knew how to write poems but did not know HOW to give response to other fantastic poems. Since 2018 this problem was over. Best wishes from Sylvia