Lesson Learned Comments

I really loved this poem. Full of strength and very reflective. My favorite line would have to be: Saddened but not sour I promise myself not to run I will never be a coward You taught me not to be one That one line is just so powerful in my opinion. Great write :)

I like the strength in this poem. Your words showcase the will to carry on in a smarter way. Fav line: wipe my face and kick down desire so it won't get in the way.

That's the spirit! Take all the positives out of a negative experience. This illustrated how torn we can feel but you came out in the best side! A brilliant pen! Totally relatable! X x