Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Lesson For Mary Comments

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In the corner of the yard where the leaning red stained fence,
Converged with the chain link line
Where a lone fig and a singular prickly pear struggled,
To convince that caliche ground
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Meggie Gultiano 23 May 2009

i love the way you ended your piece..It's beautiful.I just adore it. Hugs, Meggie

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 22 March 2009

wonderful description.........you painted a poem with brush of words.10+++

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Anjali Sinha 06 March 2009

hey another nice one did Mary finally learn that lesson keep sharing dear such fine poems -10 anjali

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