Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Lesson Comments

Rating: 5.0

The guy was just so snarly,
I took to him dislike,
the more that he was nasty,
the more my tongue would strike,
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Elizabeth Lindberg
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Ann Barber 17 September 2011

excellent, well done!

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Lamont Palmer 23 February 2011

Interesting poem. Sadly, sometimes hardships can make one bitter, instead of humbled and thoughtful. I get the feeling that this incident actually happened to you (or to someone you knew) and its not just a fictional morality tale. Thanks for posting. -LP

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Elizabeth Lindberg

Elizabeth Lindberg

Limestone, Maine
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