Less Time Comments

OMG! is that really u M Asim? its been so long brother? hows it been in India? obviously not good, look at this excuse of a poem

A well crafted poem brilliantly expressed.

It was intelligently written. Congrats!

Very good poem........

Nice poem, I liked the words. -Richard

Good delivery. Beautiful piece of poem. Sylva-Onyema Uba

Nice poem well articulated and elegantly penned. Thanks for sharing.

It's a surreal world we share in Less Time. Excellent poem.

You are master of playing with words while scribbling down your thoughts. Very nice. Enjoyed.

Ah, there you have it, a little slice of the logic of imprecision, the mathematics of emotions. The locomotion and the stasis. Take a breath. Take two, no need to make it last, there's more. And there's less. Life is rather like this, no? Almost certainly no. At least that's what I know.

decisions, decisions, decisions it's good to be free? good write.

To day it. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nice piece of work++++++++ Thanks for sharing+++++++

Less time than it takes to say it: Perpendicular.

You always have to wonder about the translation, but this has vitality and wordplay.