Saturday, October 26, 2013

Lenrie Peters (The Fence) Comments

Rating: 3.5

There where the dim past and future mingle
their nebulous hopes and aspirations
there I lie.
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Oyibo Nelson 16 June 2018

true the world changed her garment...and it seems the untruth has won the combat

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Bharati Nayak 14 January 2017

A marvelous write.Love reading..To quote a few lines- - It seems the world has changed her garment. but it is I who have not crossed the fence, So there I lie. There where the need for good and “the doing good” conflict, there I lie.

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Kedrix Udjoe 16 May 2016

The world has really changed her garment@nice personification. There i lie@nice refrein. You are sitting on the fence without make a choice@ what a delimma

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Oladehinde Temitayo 26 October 2015

There where the need for good, the doing good conflict. I just like poem nice work

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Babatunde Aremu 12 November 2013

Thank you for reminding of this poem. I was opportuned to study it for my School cert exams in the late 70s. Great work

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