Thursday, March 14, 2019

Lend Me If You May Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your eyes
your vision
your shyness
okay coyness
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Prabir Gayen 16 March 2019

Lend me thy form for just a moment it's just my wish my burning desire... Very beautiful poem.....a masterpiece dear poet......

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Prabir Gayen 16 March 2019

and not only in dreams at night they with exhilaration of happiness also perspire as you show your inner self only to those O Lord who you alone admire

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Prabir Gayen 16 March 2019

just lend me the love that you upon millions shower O Lord of heavens who promotes all love and inner volcanic fire for those who love your form entire

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Prabir Gayen 16 March 2019

give me a smile that I can hide within the inner folds of all I desire caged in my heart's corner for ever

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Prabir Gayen 16 March 2019

then upon your eyebrows plant a kiss before I flee as you shower a basket full of blush, as you fish for me

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Prabir Gayen 16 March 2019

Your eyes your vision your shyness okay coyness one I may see a face full of smiles that gives thee an immense glee

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Srijita Mondal 15 March 2019

Another great poem..10++++++

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Rajnish Manga 15 March 2019

The poem underlines the philosophy of one for all and all for one. The musings of a selfless soul guided by the Almighty God. Thanks, Dear Friend.

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M Asim Nehal 15 March 2019

Lend me your pains And I will turn it to happiness 'Lend me your worries I shall make them fly like clouds Lend me your thoughts and dreams I shall convert it to realities..... Thoughtful poem at that tender age.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 March 2019

face full of smiles, good one

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 March 2019

Lend me, O' Lend me YOU I cannot borrow the sorrow O' Lend me YOU without adieu Lend me YOU Yours all; not a few, not a vanishing dew Lend me O' Love lend me to renew the heart, the soul, the unknown all and brings to view

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