Friday, March 20, 2009

Lemons Comments

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They say if life gives you a lemon,
to make a drink.
What if you need seven,
and mix it in your sink?
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James Pritchard
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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

well painted and articulated...

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Catrina Heart 20 March 2009

Nice metaphors used in lemons with fine diction too...beautiful piece like a bling-bling....Thanks!

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James Pritchard

James Pritchard

Bamberg, Germany
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