Thursday, April 11, 2019

Lemon Is Lime, Nor Orange Comments

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Faces feign, flaunt many a mask strange,
Countless veils, copiously cunning range,
In mighty error still
Truth mirrors with a will,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bipasha D 20 May 2019

A thought provoking interesting poem. Yes, we may deceive someone for a certain time but ultimately the reality will come out. I liked the analogy of lemon and oranges.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 May 2019

Thanks indeed, Bipasha D, frankly it came handy because it was rhyming in a limerick. Only after that I thought about their inter-connection, lemon, lime, and orange. I like the way you choose poems for comments.

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Kevin Patrick 23 April 2019

Masks are the mirrors of self delusion, some live proudly behind them others live unintentionally behind them. When someone says they are fine, that could be a mask. Yet when it comes down to lemons can never be anything else. Interesting you picked lemon, in certain areas it can also be a term associated with a defective vehicle. Though I think your using the fruit. Either ways its another thought provoking poem!

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