Thursday, July 19, 2012

Lemon Hearted Comments

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Your heart is a lemon-
bitter
I've lived and died
there a thousand times
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Robin Bennett
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Incredibe- beautiful use of metaphors for this tasty poem but sour piece of lemon love fruit. Ah, for us women, I sometimes wonder why God even made men; -(Ort at least why hHe made some of them the way He did ;)

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Captain Cur 19 July 2012

What an acrid little poem. Tart and slither! I invite you to read, Deviant Tart, Red. Sweet and succulent! You will absolutely hate it! However, I love this rotten lemon poem!

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Robin Bennett

Robin Bennett

New Orleans, La USA
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