Leisure Verse.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Leisure Verse....

Rating: 3.7


leisure verse:

ice water
frozen first
flows later
like water
nice and fresh
like it is
never over the top
when I say
it is as it is....

Friday, September 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: verse
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Friday 18 September 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2020

Ice to water frozen mind perceives the amazing flow. Frozen water is ice we know. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned......full...5 stars

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 September 2020

Religion of water is flowing Though it's sometimes in barriers But it is as it is....

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M Asim Nehal 18 September 2020

Nice observation and it can be applied to relationship as well, starts with cold and then melt to reach heart and then flows to other heart.5 Stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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