leisure verse:
ice water
frozen first
flows later
like water
nice and fresh
like it is
never over the top
when I say
it is as it is....
Religion of water is flowing Though it's sometimes in barriers But it is as it is....
Nice observation and it can be applied to relationship as well, starts with cold and then melt to reach heart and then flows to other heart.5 Stars
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ice to water frozen mind perceives the amazing flow. Frozen water is ice we know. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned......full...5 stars