Leisure: [ph Ruined This Poem! ] Leisure, Leisure! ! ! ! Stop It! ! ! ! ! ....[ Deadicated To Fog Runner, A Good Poem Hunter Friend; Wonderings] Comments

I am sure, from your window we will never hear such a gunshot! Before you feel terribly bored there would be some pleasant interventions by PH friends as the one by Fog Runner.....! Bri should not end his boredom that way! No.... Never!

(continued) ...and when i put online back into the poem (in two lines the second time) , i put quotation marks around online (as in the previous sentence in this comment) and the quotation marks were submitted but with no word between them i.e., instead of online, showed up. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! good grief, Charlie Brown. : ( (to continue) ..

(continued) ..this time i had no such warning and the whole poem showed up on its page [but MINUS THE WORD online which was 'erased' during submission]. (continued) ...

OK! well, ..............NOT OK! MY HOME-HELPER and i have decided that PH is rejecting the word online from poems, just as PH does not allow a poem to be submitted with a website listing in it; but THEN PH gives a notice something like disallowed material in poem and one has to take out the material before trying to submit again. (continued) ..

A gunshot seems boring too. Why not self immolation while diving from a bridge onto a bed of nails. : -)

Encountering and encountering leisure, is so amazing but this is boring. Snoring gives amazing sense of feeling. Having goodness for friends is good. Goodness of friends motivate mind. Daily existence ever becomes 'more boring than not. Old age has its own impact on life. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned basing on perception...10

SECOND STANZA; LINE THREE..........should read ...........I was NOT ONLINE.. PH has f++ded up AGAIN! ! ! PROOFREAD YOUR POEMS, FOLKS. I TRIED ONCE TO CORRECT IT! ! : (