Saturday, November 13, 2004

Legging It Comments

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'Twas bedtime, very late the hour,
I shuffled slowly past the bath
when through the door I heard the shower,
so I reversed my sleepy path.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 12 March 2006

Ha ha ha! ! But ooh, how sensual! I like seeing you like this, Herbs. Thanks for bringing me here. Warm regards, Gina.

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kenneth william snow 28 March 2005

Very nice poem Herbert, you do rhyme well. I admire your effort and wish you many more. KN

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Scarborough Gypsy 28 March 2005

I stand corrected (as usual) by Herbert. I meant metre not mitre (I told you I'd had one too many) ! Still think it needs some fine tuning though. KR xx

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. . 13 November 2004

So glad i came back to read - just one more - :) She's a lucky girl she is... i hate her! JK

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