Legend Of The Indian Summer Comments

It's written well. There are lots of lil kinks that I suggest you correct for the sake of the reader's ability to flow as you intend it. This make me think of a street I lived on in Los Angeles (Woodland Hills) , Keokuk. Named after a local chief that convinced his tribe to embrace the westward white, as friends. All that's left of all his tribe is that street. To fulfills he irony of the brutality, it was a dead end. I see you like Indians, AmericanRhetoric.com has a collection of authentic speeches from about 8 chiefs, ranging from 1600s to late 1800s. You may find them insightful, or terrifying, but they are sincere as each of their tribes' experiences.