Friday, March 31, 2017

Legal Dissolution Of A Marriage Comments

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It was a complicated matrimonial case
They had arranged a divorce suit
Father and mother had decided to live separately.
To win the divorce case the lawyers of both side
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Michael Walker 11 July 2019

An intriguing poem about divorce.' This child was the root of all discord'. That is surprising, but quite possible. I think women's liberation can be excessive, so that men are actually disadvantaged-in my country.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

Court will not give justice to anyone, it will pass a judgement based on the facts that who is in a better position to take care of the child. The most important aspect that is Emotional attachment remains as is with all three of them. A thought provoking poem..100+++++

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madhabi banerjee 22 October 2018

thanks a lot. your comment enriched me

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

In such legal cases, the loser is always the offsprings (Sons, Daughters and progeny emerging from the marriage) I see in your poem the EGO of a father to defeat the LOVE/CARE of a mother.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

In such legal cases, the loser is always the offsprings (Sons, Daughters and progeny emerging from the marriage) I see in your poem the EGO of a father to defeat the LOVE/CARE of a mother. Court will not give justice to anyone, it will pass a judgement based on the facts that who is in a better position to take care of the child. The most important aspect that is Emotional attachment remains as is with all three of them. A thought provoking poem..100+++++

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

p.s. .....won't have any trouble to take. does this mean the couple will go home, together, happily? or, more likely, i think it means the divorce proceedings will go smoothly and the divorce will be granted quickly and be accommodating to both? i plan to use this poem when i put together my showcase (of poems by Indian subcontinent poets) for November. October 2018 's has just been completed and submitted. Thanks. bri ;)

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Madhabi Banerjee 01 October 2018

THANKI YOU BRI. YOU READ MY POEM AND GIVE YOUR COMMENTS. I AM VERY HAPPY

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) i'm guessing ego is mentioned in reference to the parents' feelings that their gender entitles them to get the divorce settlement THEY (one OR the other, NOT both) deserve. but egos are not, hopefully, going to influence the JUDGE! It's a good poem about a sometimes-sticky situation: DIVORCE! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) i like the arrangement of these 3 lines: But If they can abandon their ego a little bit each other They won't have any trouble to take. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) now i'll read the poem. Over all I am a man indeed. i would use After all.., but if the Father said Over all.., that is ok also, but has a...(somewhat at least) ...different meaning for me. to MyPoemList. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

dis- prefix a Latin prefix meaning “apart, ” “asunder, ” “away, ” “utterly, ” or having a privative, negative, or reversing force solution: noun 1. a means of solving a problem or dealing with a difficult situation so Dissolution would be (i guess) 'breaking apart to solve a problem', the problem being in 'their' marriage. i've had 3 such problems, and 3 divorces. the police frown upon murder (of husbands OR wives) . (cont.)

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