Monday, March 12, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

PLeasant words
That brews a smile,
Absolute rhymes
that lits the eye.
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Jubril Balogun
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 March 2012

You are absolutely right. Let us fly with others...10 marks

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Benjamin Paa Willie 12 March 2012

I love your words. There is flow and meaning. Keep writing and check 'stil' in line 6 unless it is deliberate. Good poem!

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Jubril Balogun

Jubril Balogun

Ogun state, Nigeria
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