Legacy Comments

and when I fold another page / from the book of empty leaves i saw not only my shadow but ours in the portrait of their minds How did you write such line... in the portrait of their mind..... Poet, please try to think you yourself again, portrait of mind........posiible! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! May be possible when a poet shows it to us.....Yet...... Individual being merged with duality by the thread, simply an unseen communication, which we commonly express as LOVE. And you have won my vote by heart. Thanks your imagery of volcanic 'hungry sweet lips'. But thats now hidden in empty page. we the reader now have to draw it alone. Regards, 10++++++ pranab

I believe this poem to be based on echos and shadows of the past present and future of a couple.

I believe this poem to be based on echos and shadows of the past present and future of a couple.

'I saw not only my shadow but ours' Rachel Ann Butler

and when I fold another page from the book of empty leaves i saw not only my shadow but ours in the portrait of their minds..................................emptiness still riffles by the portrait of love...a distinctive aura experiences instinctively, wonderfully ingenious,10++, thanks for sharing

This is an interesting poem poetic, simple words with a deep meaning Good job Lady Gace... keep expressing..10s

and when I fold another page from the book of empty leaves i saw not only my shadow but ours in the portrait of their minds.lovely poems and easy to understand the electrufying effect of two minds... it is so pure attachment and good composition....10 read mine... Mary tomarry.... miss i miss you...

wow! ! ! the Legacy has begun to the portrait of your mind, felt the electrifying beats of both entity..........nice love poem shared!

Lovely love poem....well said10