Tuesday, December 12, 2017

Legacies Of A Past Best Forgotten: - 06: A Blue Ball Of Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a pleasure
for hours together
to be in arms
in each other's arms,
...
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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D Priyanka Singh 17 December 2017

The moments when we read the eyelids speaking to each other, we fed the nerves reaching close and closer, we had our breasts inches away, Lovely song of love. 10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 17 December 2017

The moments when we read the eyelids speaking to each other, we fed the nerves reaching close and closer, we had our breasts inches away, Lovely song of love.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 December 2017

The moments when we read the eyelids speaking to each other, we fed the nerves reaching close and closer, we had our breasts inches away, 10++ for the great poem shared.

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Paresh Chakra 16 December 2017

The moment is gone, my dear, you're within my heart like a blue ball of fire though we are miles away, dwelling far. Beautiful poem shared with us. Thanks for the lovely sharing.

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