Tuesday, December 12, 2017

Legacies Of A Past Best Forgotten: - 03: The Silent Separation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why to cry
O'er the spilt milk?
The Sun is fading
below the line of dusk,
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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D Priyanka Singh 17 December 2017

the song of the dead palm tree near the graveyard A love song draped with a sweet note of passion and a tragic tone as well. So well penned 10++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 December 2017

a heart beating, an ear dying to her the footsteps of our kissing moments. Beautiful poem.So nicely written. 10

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Paresh Chakra 16 December 2017

where you stood waiting for me under that large plum tree with eyes unblinking and a heart beating, an ear dying to her the footsteps of our kissing moments. A great poem shared with us. Thanks poet. 10++

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Paresh Chakra 16 December 2017

where you stood waiting for me under that large plum tree with eyes unblinking and a heart beating, an ear dying to her the footsteps of our kissing moments. Beautiful poem.So nicely written. 10

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Anuranjita Ghadei 13 December 2017

ong since the skylark of our silent love started rhyming the song of the dead palm tree near the graveyard A love song draped with a sweet note of passion and a tragic tone as well. So well penned 10++++

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Anuranjita Ghadei 13 December 2017

ong since the skylark of our silent love started rhyming the song of the dead palm tree near the graveyard A love song draped with a sweet note of passion and a tragic tone as well. So well penned

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Alina Kaikeyi 12 December 2017

The cold autumn breeze has stopped singing long since the skylark of our silent love started rhyming the song of the dead palm tree near the graveyard A love song draped with a sweet note of passion and a tragic tone as well. So well penned. 10++++ Alina

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Alina Kaikeyi 12 December 2017

The cold autumn breeze has stopped singing long since the skylark of our silent love started rhyming the song of the dead palm tree near the graveyard A love song draped with a sweet note of passion and a tragic tone as well. So well penned.

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