Tuesday, December 12, 2017

Legacies Of A Past Best Forgotten: - 01: That Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

That day
Our heart full of joy,
and full of happiness,
with desires-
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Anuranjita Ghadei 24 January 2018

It is best cleaned off the shawls of bad memory and hats of good wounds that still carry those shy stains of our sweet conjugation over the bright clothing of moonlit nights dipped with our myriad dreams..... A beautiful poem with so delicacy and lovelorn feelings. 10++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 December 2017

and the wiped out fragrances off the dry stains of blood that clotted wounds ago, A great song of love that bathes with tons of imagerie 10++

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Anuranjita Ghadei 13 December 2017

and the wiped out fragrances off the dry stains of blood that clotted wounds ago, A great song of love that bathes with tons of imageries

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D Priyanka Singh 13 December 2017

never have a try too to smell out the remains and the wiped out fragrances off the dry stains of blood that clotted wounds ago, A great song of love that bathes with tons of imageries sweet and lovely. 10++++

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Prativa Rani 12 December 2017

never have a try too to smell out the remains and the wiped out fragrances off the dry stains of blood that clotted wounds ago, A great song of love that bathes with tons of imageries

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Alina Kaikeyi 12 December 2017

So darling, never mind, never cry, never have a try too to smell out the remains and the wiped out fragrances off the dry stains of blood that clotted wounds ago, A great song of love that bathes with tons of imageries sweet and lovely. Loved it Sir. 10+++++++ Alina

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Alina Kaikeyi 12 December 2017

So darling, never mind, never cry, never have a try too to smell out the remains and the wiped out fragrances off the dry stains of blood that clotted wounds ago, A great song of love that bathes with tons of imageries sweet and lovely. Loved it Sir.

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Rini Shibu 12 December 2017

Subhas this is one of the best poems you have written.. Memories and nostalgia of past fragrance of love

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Binayakumar Mohanty 12 December 2017

Lets best forge a smile On our dry cracked lips Of past And forget it.we can not forget sir.Even if bury it deepest it will keep hurting our newer venture and adventure.Deeper pain within lively crafted.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Wow, what a grand comment sir! Loved it.

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