Sunday, October 28, 2012

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My mind walks the miles that I'd not dare step,
as the sun peeks through my curtain upon my chest.
If any other simplicity could embrace my tortured emptiness,
I have not found it.
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Dakota Ellerton
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Kelly Seale 15 November 2012

Dakota, This piece is without a boubt, the best thing I have read in a while... It tells it's story, it's pain and frustration... between the lines... and your words convey such emotion hidden within. And the Title unfolds at the end... Perfect. Great ink Dakota. When I read something like this... It pulls me in to read more... Well Done! ; -) -Kelly.

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