Friday, December 29, 2017

Left With Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The eyes have dried up
But still wet
with painful tears,
As the luster resides no more.
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zainab ahmed
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 October 2018

Pain feels like still I smile in this world, dying inside, , shrouding desolation.. beautiful expression, very poetic.. thank u dear poetess for your verses on grief.......... tony

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Asif Ansari 29 December 2017

Very good poem...

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Rajnish Manga 29 December 2017

During this festive atmosphere, something seems to have gone amiss. Situation nicely portrayed. Thanks. Dying inside, merriment traunt.... Nothing can bring unseen gaiety

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Zainab Ahmed 30 December 2017

thank you sir.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 December 2017

Zainab, such a touching poem...10+++

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Zainab Ahmed 30 December 2017

thank you so much.happy new year

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Zainab Ahmed 30 December 2017

thank you so much. Happy new year.

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