Left With Pain Poem by zainab ahmed

Left With Pain

Rating: 5.0


The eyes have dried up
But still wet
with painful tears,
As the luster resides no more.

Pain feels like hell
still I smile in this world,
Everything seems black
No beautiful colors left.

Dying inside, merriment traunt
Nothing can bring unseen gaiety,
Ostensible joys are flowing
shrouding desolation from mankind.

Friday, December 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 October 2018

Pain feels like still I smile in this world, dying inside, , shrouding desolation.. beautiful expression, very poetic.. thank u dear poetess for your verses on grief.......... tony

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Asif Ansari 29 December 2017

Very good poem...

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Rajnish Manga 29 December 2017

During this festive atmosphere, something seems to have gone amiss. Situation nicely portrayed. Thanks. Dying inside, merriment traunt.... Nothing can bring unseen gaiety

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Zainab Ahmed 30 December 2017

thank you sir.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 December 2017

Zainab, such a touching poem...10+++

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Zainab Ahmed 30 December 2017

thank you so much. Happy new year.

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Zainab Ahmed 30 December 2017

thank you so much.happy new year

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