Thursday, August 14, 2014

Left To Find The Right Lane Comments

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Turn left and then take the first right
Go straight till find on left a lane
Walk a few paces till comes to your sight
A left turn and one more again!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2014

Beautiful poem.This poem you have portrayed it very beautifully. If we ask anyone the address, they will just confuse us and we reach from where we started it. I have experienced this many a times..I wrote a similar poem on this confusion. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 August 2014

Very insightful though a little bit confused otherwise a very well crafted piece.......Pradipjee.......

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