Thursday, December 27, 2012

Left, Right, Left Comments

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It is a weight we learn to carry
Not at an age
But in a moment, in an instant…
We bend our knees…
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Angel Payne
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Luscious Larry 28 December 2012

Pretty good. I wasn't sure about the 'left right left' thing, but I decided I like it. It adds to the poem's allure. Good job!

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